pollution is going to rek our world

this is about pollution and how the world might not be the way it is today if you do not do something about  how we are polluting our world we will not have a world in the future.    

Did you know i am a scorpio

do you know what i in richards attic

This is what we were doing in our class this term. we have discover what is in richards grandma attic. his grandmother was given a huia broch and it was illegal to get them or shot them because laws said to stop killing them otherwise they would die out like this day.

Did the film communicate the script?
I think that we did communicate with the script because it
was eazy to understand.

Did it communicate the rising emotion being portrayed?
I think that we did some emotions but we could do a bit more.

What could you shoot differently?
I that we could shoot differently about cutting people heads out.

What would make your film more understandable?
I think that we could use my words more than waking.

What would give your film more emotional impact?